"Insider" a five minute freewrite

This #freewrite was written in five minutes using @mariannewest’s prompt:

Insider

https://steempeak.com/hive-161155/@mariannewest/day-859-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-insider

At first James thought The Insider was a symptom of some kind of mental illness. Kay, one of James' cousins, had been diagnosed with schizophrenia two years ago, and although it was only whispered about he was worried that the things he was experiencing were very similar.

"She hears voices, you know," James had over heard his mother say to his father. "And she thinks someone is controlling her thoughts."

That was about three months before The Insider made itself known to James.

James had been taking a shit at the time.

"Hello James," the voice said, loud and clear in his head. He looked around the small room but there was no one there. And besides, James knew the voice came from within his head.

From Inside his mind.

"Aren't you going to say hello back," the voice said. "I thought you had been brought up better than that."

...

As usual I wrote the freewrite in five minutes using themostdangerouswritingapp.com and then copied and pasted it into a googledoc, tied it up a bit.

Screenshot 20200227 at 11.47.17.png

...

This post will feature in the new Freewriters Community (hive-161155) Curation Newsletter: The Freewriters Daily

Newsletter.jpg

To find it visit the Freewriters Community (hive-161155) published sometime after 4pm UTC
...

Join the Freewriters Hive Community!

hive-161155

...

40% of the author rewards of this post are divided amongst the following accounts: @steempeak, @freewritehouse, @steemchiller, @thealliance, @theluvbug
Screenshot 20190910 at 09.24.03.png


As well as Steem upvotes I upvote posts in the following Tribes: #leo, #palnet, #sports, #marlians and #creativecoin #neoxian #sonicgroove

![)

@felt.buzz curation accounts: @felt.buzz.pal @felt.buzz.leo @felt.buzz.sports @felt.buzz.marl @felt.buzz.ccc @felt.buzz.neox @felt.buzz.sonicgroove

Proud member of two GREAT houses:

@freewritehouse and #PowerHouseCreatives

...


@steemitbloggers has evolved! We are now the #PowerHouseCreatives

JOIN OUR DISCORD COMMUNITY
SUBSCRIBE TO OUR COMMUNITY FEED

LIKE OUR FB PAGE
FOLLOW US ON TWITTER

....

PHC-Footer-05.gif

@theluvbug
Do your posts need some more luv? Come and meet @theluvbug!
Resteems, and upvotes for quality posts!

Supporting the Steem Family
The Alliance
Join @thealliance

Authors get paid when people like you upvote their post.
If you enjoyed what you read here, create your account today and start earning FREE STEEM!
Sort Order:  

You have used the Hashtag #[CC] and can now reward 178.0 comments under your post with one CC.

More information about the Commentcoin-Project can be found on this account.
You can easily add an upvote to this post to support the project.
Thanks for using it.

Happy comments.
Your CC-Team:
@kristall97 ([Code-Designer])
@alucian ([Project-Designer])

Sounds like you might be starting a ghost story. 👻

Good start. I like it.